I hope you don't mine my commenting on this, I just really liked it. I've admired your work on the "Goodmorning" list on LJ, I love your Cain characterization especially.

His starting to smoke and then stopping right away because of Glitch is perfect.

This one really grabbed me though I don't usually like threesomes in slash but the way your presenting this, I think I WOULD like it. I would DEfinitely read it! If they were as close as you have them even if it started with Cain and Glitch could the viewer be far behind? The emotional out flow would overwhelm any sense of distance.

I really hope you write or are writing something in the 'verse.
Anyway there's my two cents, hope you don't mind, thanks.